剧本大纲《我在一夜之间成为了名为深圳实际却是异世界冒险者》

深圳少年A平常喜欢ACG,也有为数不多的几个朋友。虽然其中朋友B虽然家里貌似有些背景,但没什么架子,在讨论游戏方面和少年A特别投缘。(镜头:朋友B坐上有保镖护卫的轿车,和少年A打招呼后离去,背景音有人议论,不知B是何身份,有人说听说是官二代但人还挺低调的,另外一人说是啊人也不错。)

在一个星期天,少年A在放学回家的路上,走上一个上坡之后,却惊讶地发现所有高楼大厦不翼而飞,取而代之的是无数飞龙和巨大的恶魔巢穴。少年A连忙掏出华为手机,用颤抖的手拍下几张照片,但聚焦效果不好,就改成视频模式。视频中的巨龙越来越近,突然有一头发现少年A的存在,作势喷火,少年A连忙主动滚下路坡,火焰身后上空呼啸而过。

这时,和朋友B长相有几分类似,但身材高大的路人C突然出现在少年A身边,用一个透明的斗篷罩住两人,并示意少年A不要发出声音。巨龙从两人头上飞过,盘旋几圈之后离去。(镜头:飞翔中的巨龙在某个角度瞪着两人,少年A紧张万分,但飞龙视而不见。)巨龙飞走之后,路人C才向少年A解释到,操纵巨龙军团的黑暗帝王D占据了深圳福田区,人民正在组织反击。(镜头:少年A提问为什么军队……怎么没有飞机轰炸……但每次问题刚出口,画面就变成乱码然后回到几秒之前,少年A也忘了之前的问题,最后只能改口那现在应该怎么办。)

路人C引导少年A从某魔法阵路点(游戏中常见的传送装置)传送到一个游戏中常见的城镇,并让少年A设定自己的能力。少年A提出能否设为多能力、时间系、空间系等等,但路人C指出多能力和时间系是不可能的,空间系能力仅限随着黑暗帝王D一并出现的魔法阵可以使用,没有物品和能力能开启空间能力(传送,移动物体等等)。于是少年A选择链状闪电的能力,并询问如何使用,路人C说只要想象就可以,但一旦设定之后不可改变。少年A成功使出闪电并击中一个靶子,路人C满意地表示很不错,然后把少年A带领到一个巨大的地图前面。

地图上有迷雾,表示人类尚未探索到的区域。有能看到但是颜色深的区域,路人C表示每个人看到的地图都不同,如果本人没有探索过这个地方,对他来说地图会显示颜色深。除此之外,还有显示出不同图案的地方,路人C说是不同巨龙的据点,每个据点被打败之后就可以开启当地的魔法阵路点并设立城镇营地。人们的目的是夺取更多的路点,拯救危险中的普通人并帮助他们获得能力,最终击败黑暗帝王D。

路人C:虽然现在我们只有几百名同伴,但已经夺取十分之二的据点了,总有一天我们会击败黑暗帝王D!

在经历了种种充满友情,爱情,背叛,热血的冒险之后(因为迷雾地区很大,冒险长度可能是小说或者电视剧里几个月的长度,或者电影里几个小时的成都不等),少年A和自己的朋友们在一个巨龙路点陷入了前所未有的危机。在将近团灭的时刻,少年A脑中闪现出之前遇到的种种违和感,突然冒出了一个想法……

路人C打断少年A的思路:(重伤中)少年A,这次我们的冒险可能要到终点了……但是我相信黑暗帝王D是一定会被击败的……
少年A:但是代价呢?我们已经牺牲了同伴E、同伴F……这一切真的有意义吗?
路人C:当然!虽然我没法看到那一天了,但你还有逃生的希望……总有一天……
少年A:我不要希望……我要现在就结束这一切!
路人C:可是你的闪电是没法击败眼前的敌人的,你需要更多的同伴,配合他们的能力使用不同的战术……
少年A:说到能力,我一直有个疑问:为什么设定了能力之后就不能改变?为什么击败敌人能力无法升级?最根本的:能力是从哪里来的?!
路人C:(震惊)……你为什么这么想?你怎么还能这么想??

这时,巨龙发现了藏起来的他们。少年A身上冒出闪光,大喊到:“让这一切都结束吧……我说这一切!!我·的·闪·电·能·遍·布·这·空·间·的·每·个·地·方!”

只见少年A身上的闪电在据点流窜,巨龙在闪电中哀嚎;闪电甚至劈向所有方向,把整个据点建筑击碎,并扩展到所有地方……令人惊讶的是,闪电的范围限制在地表上的一个长方体内。(画面转白,monotone声音想起并淡出)

从梦中醒来的少年A自言自语道:“几个小时的梦里发生这么多事,真有意思……”然后起床吃饭上学。在吃饭的时候,电视在背景响起新闻:“福田区数千人在梦中发出痛苦的叫声,在送医院后发现生命体征并没有严重问题,但到目前为止无人醒来……另一起新闻,龙岗华为一处数据中心冒出浓烟,具体原因正在调查之中。”少年A陷入沉思。

到了学校,在上楼的一个拐角,突然有人一拍少年A的肩膀。少年A转头一看,原来是阴沉着脸的朋友B。

朋友B:你知道自己干的好事了吧!
少年A:果然是你……你怎么知道我知道了?
朋友B:你照常醒来并上学,就说明你已经猜到真相了,才能把梦中发生的事只当成一场梦而已。可惜其他人,这下可能永远也醒不来了……
少年A:为什么?这是怎么做到的?大家的梦怎么会连在一起?
朋友B:这是基于华为鸿蒙系统的一个大型网游,但不是基于互联网,而是基于超强力的电磁波。在电磁波笼罩的范围内,我们可以自由指定个体,并把他们拉到网游世界里,只不过不是在电脑上,而是在梦中。
少年A:但是引导系统目前还是要由人工来做的,所以不能一次拉进来太多人。你们这些知道底细的人有多少?
朋友B:没多少,没那么多政治过硬的人。
少年A:别的不说,你们的技能系统也太粗糙了吧!每个人可以自由设定技能是怎么做到的?
朋友B:没办法,我们需要加快测试。这就是中国速度。其实我们的系统很简单:第一,新用户技能系统需要引导者帮忙开启。第二,禁止空间系技能,因为怕遇到out of bound的bug对系统造成不可知的影响。至于时间系技能本来就不可能,就算在梦中也不能回搠时间,而且所有人的时间本来就是同步的。第三,能力一旦设定就是永久性的,因为升级系统还没做。我们本来也想收集不同用户自己设定的技能来测试一下用户的中二程度……
少年A:可是有人一开始就设定了原子弹技能怎么办?
朋友B:没人在测试技能的时候就会发出会杀死自己的身边朋友,炸毁整个空间的大招,而技能一旦设定一次,威力就被固定住了。所以一般来说是不会出乱子的。
少年A:那我的闪电技能怎么能调整威力?
朋友B:我怎么知道?内测期间能力的限制没什么问题,估计是什么奇怪的Bug吧。本来虽然技能会对他人造成影响,但游戏中死亡的话会正常醒来,梦中的场景也会像普通的梦一样在几分钟之内忘记。但这个bug引发的后果却是对所有不知道自己身在梦中的人的精神造成生理上无法承受的冲击,而就算不知道所有内情的你,也不会忘记梦中的内容了。拜你所赐,输出功率被大大加强,数据中心也过载了。
少年A:怎么是我的错??说到底,你们公测为什么通知玩家内情?强推可能死人的游戏不是神经病吗?!
朋友B:废话,我们怎么知道系统还有这么严重的bug?而且公测的目的本来就是要在不知情的情况下让人参与游戏,因为这游戏主要的市场是海外。让发达国家一夜之间体会到这个游戏的好玩之处,这是大国复兴战略里重要的一环,只要能一炮打响,我们就能用网游换外汇,再也不怕什么贸易战了。要是让外国提前知道我们这网游的存在,说不定会被当成大规模武器看待,我们需要的就是一炮……
少年A:可现在可是一炮打死了啊!现在出了这么大事……
朋友B:好在是国内公测,控评就完了。早上领导还没上班,新闻不小心爆出去了,不过只要删帖控评,几小时之内这事就会当成是嗜睡重感冒,让什么野味背锅就算了。
少年A:牛逼,我操……

(全剧终)

好莱坞要是能收了这剧本就好了。冒险部分我填上,保证起码不输给景甜宇宙。写成轻小说也不错。
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分享 2021-05-31

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槽点太多。。
Google翻译一下

Script outline "I became called Shenzhen overnight, but I am an adventurer in another world"

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Shenzhen teenager A usually likes ACG, and he has a few friends. Although friend B seems to have some background at home, he doesn't have much arrogance, and he has a special affinity with teenager A in discussing games. (Camera: Friend B gets in a car with bodyguards, greets teenager A and leaves. Some people talk about the background sound, but I don’t know who B is. Some people say that they are the second generation of officials but they are quite low-key. Another said Yeah, people are good too.)

On a Sunday, boy A was on his way home from school and went uphill, but was surprised to find that all the tall buildings were missing, replaced by countless flying dragons and huge demon lairs. Teenager A quickly took out a Huawei mobile phone and took a few photos with his shaking hands, but the focus was not good, so he changed to video mode. The dragon in the video is getting closer and closer, and suddenly one of them discovers the existence of young man A, spitting fire, young man A hastily took the initiative to roll down the roadside, whizzing past the flames.

At this time, he looked a bit similar to friend B, but a tall passer-by C suddenly appeared next to teenager A, covered them with a transparent cloak, and motioned to teenager A not to make any noise. The dragon flew over the two of them, circled for a few times and then left. (Camera: The flying dragon stares at the two at a certain angle. Teenager A is extremely nervous, but the flying dragon turns a blind eye.) After the dragon flies away, passer-by C explains to the young A that the dark emperor D who controls the dragon army Occupying the Futian District of Shenzhen, the people are organizing a counterattack. (Camera: Young man A asks why the army... why there is no plane bombing... But every time the question is exported, the screen becomes garbled and then goes back a few seconds ago. Young man A also forgot the previous question, and finally could only change his words. What should I do.)

Passer-by C guides teenager A from a magic circle waypoint (a common teleport device in the game) to a common town in the game, and lets the teenager A set his own abilities. Teenager A proposed whether it could be set to multi-abilities, time systems, space systems, etc., but passer-by C pointed out that multi-abilities and time systems are impossible, and the space system abilities can only be used by the magic circle that appears along with the dark emperor D , No items and abilities can open space abilities (teleport, move objects, etc.). So teenager A chose the ability of chain lightning and asked how to use it. Passer-by C said that as long as you imagine it, you can't change it once you set it. Teenager A succeeded in using lightning and hit a target. Passer-by C said with satisfaction that it was good, and then led Teenager A to the front of a huge map.

There is a fog on the map, indicating an area that has not yet been explored by humans. There are areas that can be seen but the color is dark. Passerby C said that everyone sees a different map. If he has not explored this place, the map will show a dark color to him. In addition, there are places that show different patterns. Passer-by C said that it is a stronghold of different dragons. After each stronghold is defeated, the local magical waypoint can be opened and a town camp can be set up. People's purpose is to capture more waypoints, save ordinary people in danger and help them gain abilities, and ultimately defeat the Dark King D.

Passerby C: Although we have only a few hundred companions now, we have already seized two tenths of the stronghold. One day we will defeat the Dark King D!

After experiencing all kinds of adventures full of friendship, love, betrayal, and passion (because the foggy area is very large, the length of the adventure may be a few months in a novel or TV series, or a few hours in Chengdu in a movie), Junior A I fell into an unprecedented crisis at a giant dragon road point with my friends. At the moment when the regiment was about to die, the various senses of violation that had been encountered before flashed in the mind of Teenager A, and suddenly an idea emerged...

Passer-by C interrupted Juvenile A’s thoughts: (seriously injured) Juvenile A, this time our adventure may come to an end... But I believe the Dark King D will definitely be defeated...
Teenager A: But what's the price? We have sacrificed Companion E and Companion F... Does it really make sense?
Passerby C: Of course! Although I can't see that day, but you still have hope of escape... someday...
Teenager A: I don't want to...I want to end it now!
Passerby C: But your lightning can't defeat the enemy in front of you. You need more companions and use different tactics to match their abilities...
Junior A: Speaking of ability, I always have a question: Why can't I change the ability after I set it? Why can't the ability to defeat the enemy be upgraded? The most fundamental: Where does the ability come from? !
Passerby C: (shocked)...Why do you think so? How can you still think like this? ?

At this time, the dragon found them hidden. A flash of light appeared on the boy A, shouting: "Let it all end...I said it all!! I...the flash...the electricity...the energy...the cloth...the space...the space...every... A place, a place!"

I saw the lightning on Young A’s body rushing through the stronghold, and the dragon wailing in the lightning; the lightning even split in all directions, smashing the entire stronghold building, and spreading it to all places... Surprisingly, the range of lightning is limited to A cuboid on the surface. (The picture turns white, the monotone sound is remembered and fades out)

Teenager A who woke up from his dream said to himself: "So many things happened in a few hours of dreams, it's really interesting..." Then he got up to eat and go to school. During the meal, news rang out on the TV in the background: "Thousands of people in Futian District made painful screams in their dreams. After being sent to the hospital, they found that there was no serious problem with their vital signs, but no one has woken up so far... In the news, there was heavy smoke from a data center in Longgang Huawei. The specific cause is under investigation." Youth A was lost in thought.

When I arrived at the school, at a corner of the stairs, someone suddenly slapped Teenager A on the shoulder. Teenager A turned his head and saw that it was friend B with a gloomy face.

Friend B: Do you know what you have done?
Teenager A: It really is you... how do you know that I know?
Friend B: If you wake up and go to school as usual, it means that you have guessed the truth, so that what happened in your dream can only be regarded as a dream. It's a pity that others, this time may never wake up...
Teenager A: Why? how did you do that? How can everyone's dreams be connected together?
Friend B: This is a large-scale online game based on the Huawei Hongmeng system, but it is not based on the Internet, but based on super powerful electromagnetic waves. Within the envelope of electromagnetic waves, we can freely designate individuals and drag them into the world of online games, but not on the computer, but in a dream.
Teenager A: But the guidance system is still done manually, so you can't bring in too many people at once. How many of you know the details?
Friend B: Not many, not so many people with good politics.
Junior A: Apart from anything else, your skill system is too rough! Everyone can freely set the skills how to do it?
Friend B: No way, we need to speed up the test. This is China's speed. In fact, our system is very simple: First, the new user skill system needs the help of the guide to open it. Second, the space-based skills are forbidden, because they are afraid that out of bound bugs will have unknowable effects on the system. As for time-based skills, it is inherently impossible, even in a dream, you can't recall time, and everyone's time is originally synchronized. Third, once the ability is set, it is permanent, because the upgrade system has not yet been done. We originally wanted to collect the skills set by different users to test the user's secondary level...
Boy A: But what if someone sets the atomic bomb skill at the beginning?
Friend B: When no one is testing the skills, they will kill their friends around them and blow up the entire space. Once the skills are set once, the power is fixed. So generally speaking, there will be no trouble.
Junior A: Then how can my lightning skill adjust its power?
Friend B: How do I know? There is no problem with the limitation of the ability during the closed beta period. It is probably a strange bug. Although the skills will affect others, if you die in the game, you will wake up normally, and the scenes in the dream will be forgotten within a few minutes like a normal dream. But the consequence of this bug is to cause a physical unbearable impact on the spirit of all people who don't know that they are in a dream, and even if you don't know all of your inner feelings, you won't forget the content of the dream. Thanks to you, the output power has been greatly enhanced and the data center has been overloaded.
Teenager A: Why is it my fault? ? After all, why do you inform players about the public beta? Isn't it a neurosis to force a game that might kill you? !
Friend B: Nonsense, how do we know that the system has such a serious bug? And the purpose of the public beta was originally to let people participate in the game without knowing it, because the main market for this game is overseas. Let developed countries experience the fun of this game overnight. This is an important part of the strategy of rejuvenation of great powers. As long as it can be launched, we can exchange foreign exchange with online games, and we will no longer be afraid of trade wars. If we let foreign countries know the existence of our online games in advance, they might be treated as weapons of mass, what we need is a shot...
Teenager A: But now it's killed by a single shot! Now there is such a big thing...
Friend B: Fortunately, it is the domestic public test, and the control evaluation is over. In the morning, the leader hadn't gone to work, and the news broke out accidentally, but as long as the post was deleted to control the comment, the matter would be regarded as lethargy and a severe cold within a few hours.
Teenager A: Great, fuck me...

(End)

If only Hollywood could accept the script.

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